There is a lot of repetition within the photos that each display the same position but have a different take on light direction and intensity of shadow. Position of light seems to be the strongest aspect of the photos while still having clear focus. That being said, the composition of the bottles were too far out and almost seemed like they were just pictures of bottles. On contrast it looks as though you forgot to switch back to monochrome. The focus seemed off on some of the pictures. Though there is a lot of good repetition in poses, it almost seemed like too much repetition at times.
Well done on the direction of light. it is clearly visible where the light is coming from. However, composition could use a little improvement. Few of the images appeared way too linear and displayed more of a bottle shape instead of interesting shadows. The contrast section images were nice, you could use a bit more shadows. We really liked your play with the temperatures. You did a great a really nice job on executing those warm and cool temperatures. Your linear compositions worked very well in this area. It appears that you might have forgotten too switch your camera back to monochromatic because those images indicate of some warm and cool colors in those pictures. Great job on the images in the hardness section. Awesome compositions and diffusion of the shadows. Love how you have gradation displayed in your shadows. Good job. Well done.
There is a lot of repetition within the photos that each display the same position but have a different take on light direction and intensity of shadow. Position of light seems to be the strongest aspect of the photos while still having clear focus. That being said, the composition of the bottles were too far out and almost seemed like they were just pictures of bottles. On contrast it looks as though you forgot to switch back to monochrome. The focus seemed off on some of the pictures. Though there is a lot of good repetition in poses, it almost seemed like too much repetition at times.
ReplyDeleteWell done on the direction of light. it is clearly visible where the light is coming from. However, composition could use a little improvement. Few of the images appeared way too linear and displayed more of a bottle shape instead of interesting shadows. The contrast section images were nice, you could use a bit more shadows. We really liked your play with the temperatures. You did a great a really nice job on executing those warm and cool temperatures. Your linear compositions worked very well in this area. It appears that you might have forgotten too switch your camera back to monochromatic because those images indicate of some warm and cool colors in those pictures. Great job on the images in the hardness section. Awesome compositions and diffusion of the shadows. Love how you have gradation displayed in your shadows. Good job. Well done.
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