Charlotte from the beginning looking at your direction I feel that it could use some improvement. While looking through the images in the characteristic the light was coming from only a few of the 8 positions. It also seems as if the pictures were focused mainly on the bottles not really the lights, could use more of an interesting composition. With in the intensity category the images have an interesting use of life you can really see softness of the fill light. However, most of these in this section were out of focus, we could possibly be missing what you were trying to focus the image on. With in temperature it appears that there wasn't much variation in the color. We feel that the first and last images stuck out the most, due to the color use. The contrast section was outstanding, we really enjoyed your first image. There was a great use of highlights as well. Finally your harness was nicely composed. There was a wonderful display of shadows and the shadow compositions were wonderful. Some of the images were fuzzy, possibly focusing on the objects that were closer to the camera lens it could have created a more interesting space composition. Overall good job, it seems to us that you made improvement throughout the project.
Some of the temperature shots are nice and have a good use of light. There was a lot of varied poses. The shadows are nice in a lot of the shots as well. The first category displayed good use of shadow, however, there is no clear distinction in position of light. The intensity category again displayed a good use of shadow and position of the bottles. This category along with most of the images chosen keep the same light direction, though the images have good qualities it is important to show the variety of positioning and composition within the images. The quality of a lot of images came out blurry, focus a little more time in making sure the image is clear in what you are trying to capture. Overall, the there is a lot of growth from start to finish with small things to keep in mind in the future.
Charlotte from the beginning looking at your direction I feel that it could use some improvement. While looking through the images in the characteristic the light was coming from only a few of the 8 positions. It also seems as if the pictures were focused mainly on the bottles not really the lights, could use more of an interesting composition. With in the intensity category the images have an interesting use of life you can really see softness of the fill light. However, most of these in this section were out of focus, we could possibly be missing what you were trying to focus the image on. With in temperature it appears that there wasn't much variation in the color. We feel that the first and last images stuck out the most, due to the color use. The contrast section was outstanding, we really enjoyed your first image. There was a great use of highlights as well. Finally your harness was nicely composed. There was a wonderful display of shadows and the shadow compositions were wonderful. Some of the images were fuzzy, possibly focusing on the objects that were closer to the camera lens it could have created a more interesting space composition. Overall good job, it seems to us that you made improvement throughout the project.
ReplyDeleteSome of the temperature shots are nice and have a good use of light. There was a lot of varied poses. The shadows are nice in a lot of the shots as well. The first category displayed good use of shadow, however, there is no clear distinction in position of light. The intensity category again displayed a good use of shadow and position of the bottles. This category along with most of the images chosen keep the same light direction, though the images have good qualities it is important to show the variety of positioning and composition within the images. The quality of a lot of images came out blurry, focus a little more time in making sure the image is clear in what you are trying to capture. Overall, the there is a lot of growth from start to finish with small things to keep in mind in the future.
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