Overall there was a good focus on light and shadow in each composition rather than a focus on bottles. The temperature had a good variety and display. We noticed is that you have a strong sense of temperature and hardness. there is a good use of shadow and contrast in each photo in those two categories. There is a lot of repetition which can take away from the objective or message of the image. Maybe try new positions in the future to show variety. We also noticed that there is a lot of images that were blurry, try to keep in mind the image quality.
You forgot to include your name in the title. Nice pictures, however, you did not label your directions and it is really hard to see where the light is coming from. It seems as if you might have confused some of the images and included them from other characteristics. Your seventh image in this section does a wonderful display of composition and light direction. Your first few photos in that same section appear to be diffused instead of light direction. You also have one of your temperature images included in the intensity section and couple monochrome photos included into a temperature section. Overall you did a nice job. Just need a bit more organization and labeling.
Overall there was a good focus on light and shadow in each composition rather than a focus on bottles. The temperature had a good variety and display. We noticed is that you have a strong sense of temperature and hardness. there is a good use of shadow and contrast in each photo in those two categories. There is a lot of repetition which can take away from the objective or message of the image. Maybe try new positions in the future to show variety. We also noticed that there is a lot of images that were blurry, try to keep in mind the image quality.
ReplyDeleteYou forgot to include your name in the title. Nice pictures, however, you did not label your directions and it is really hard to see where the light is coming from. It seems as if you might have confused some of the images and included them from other characteristics. Your seventh image in this section does a wonderful display of composition and light direction. Your first few photos in that same section appear to be diffused instead of light direction. You also have one of your temperature images included in the intensity section and couple monochrome photos included into a temperature section. Overall you did a nice job. Just need a bit more organization and labeling.
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